All required reading assignments are in Jenn’s xeroxed  anthology.

[G = optional pages in Bump, Gerard Manley Hopkins PR 4803 H44 Z597, PCL and UGL]

 

 

Introductory Course Materials.

1-4                   Table of Contents

5-6                   Course Description

7-18F              Reading Schedule

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COURSE POLICIES AND RESOURCES

19-21               Group Participation Guidelines

22-24               Guidelines for Listening

25                    Racial Harassment Policy

26-27               Sexual Harassment Policy

28-29               Drug and Alcohol Policy

30                    Undergraduate Writing Center FAC   211

31-32               Learning Skills Center

33                    Changing your email address for Blackboard

34-35                Grades Definition

36                    Teaching Philosophy

37A                 Discovery Learning

37B-C             Brickley, “Value of the Liberal Arts”

37D-E             Bump, “Logic of the Humanities”

37F-G             Discovery Learning Project

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WRITING INSTRUCTIONS, EXAMPLES, ADVICE

38                    Previous Course Goals CHANGE

39-40               Learning Record Instructions

41A-41K         Semiotics, from The World is a Text              

41L-47            Dass, “The Witness”

48-52               Lopez, “A Literature of Place”

53                    Wordsworth,  “Michael, A Pastoral Poem”

54                    Pater, introduction

55-57               Pater, “The Child in the House”

57B                 Dickens, introduction

57C-58            Dickens, from Hard Times

59-62               Shideler, “The Classroom’s Sense of Place”

63-66               Road Map of Your Journey

67-68               Formal Writing Project Instructions

69-76               from Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain

77                    from Writing the Natural Way

78-79               from Wild Mind

80-90               Faigley, “Effective Visual Design”

91                    Why spell checkers are not enough

92-95               Appositives

96-97               Hyphens

 98-101           Verb Tense Consistency

102                  Coherence

103                  Web Site Citation guidelines

104-105           Putting Pages on the Web  Using Webspace

106                  Web Projects

107                  Polished Writing II: Revising the Essay

108-110           Proofreading

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111-114           Journaling Instructions

115                  PC vs. Mac

116                   Map of Campus

 

 

Jan 22. : the New Reading and Writing

 

Writing due: [1] Journal entry [2 copies] on your experience or lack of it of Discovery Learning, the Liberal Arts, and the Humanities   (pp. 37A-G and on the web site). [2] Completed Questionnaires See how to do a response essay,  Bazerman, pp. 47-48, and Journaling Instructions in our packet, pp. 111-114.

 

Readings for today's class:

37A                 Discovery Learning

37B-C             Brickley, "Value of the Liberal Arts"

37D-E             Bump, "Logic of the Humanities"

37F-G             Discovery Learning Project

111-114           Journaling Instructions

115                  PC vs. Mac

"Left vs. Right Side of the  Brain: Hypermedia and the New Puritanism"  [connect your browser to

 www.cwrl.utexas.edu/currents/fall99/bump.html]

also

¸      see ACITS short courses and HTML class schedules:

¸      http://www.utexas.edu/computer/classes/

¸      see self paced tutorials: http://www.utexas.edu/cc/training/handouts/tutorials.html#internet

¸       

¸      If you are interested in possibly making a web site, check out Netscape Composer or Dream Weaver or ….

 

 

3. Jan 27. Your Sense of Place

 Writing Due: Journal entry [2 copies] on your sense of place, perhaps including list of  places important to you.

            Read

41A-41K         Semiotics, from The World is a Text  

48-52               Lopez, “A Literature of Place”

53                    Wordsworth,  “Michael, A Pastoral Poem”

54                    Pater, introduction

55-57               Pater, “The Child in the House”

57B                 Dickens, introduction

57C-58            Dickens, from Hard Times

59-62               Shideler, “The Classroom’s Sense of Place”

212-219           Crowe, Nature and the Idea of a Man-Made World 

            Review

111-116           Journaling Instructions

 

4. Jan. 29.   ROAD MAP OF YOUR PLACES

 

Assignment Due: Bring to class a visual representation of the various “places” you have experienced over the course of your life. Can be in the form of a graph or a mandala or a map or computer program or ……  For electronic examples, see web site. This will become part of your portfolio.

 

63-66               Road Map of Your Journey

 

to see the road maps of your predecessors in the course go to

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E320M/pics/maps/

 

 

5. Feb. 3 PLACE: The Roles of Time and the City

 

Journal entry [2 copies] on Crowe on Time and the evolution of things ; Nature and the City; man-made world vs. nature

 

            Read:

198-211, 220-244 Crowe, Nature and the Idea of a Man-Made World

            Review:

212-219 Crowe, Nature and the Idea of a Man-Made World

 

¸      Bring your calendars so that we can decide in class (1) when we meet at St. Mary’s Cathedral; (2) at the Japanese Garden in Zilker park; (3) if and when we perform from the Alice books while rowing at Zilker Park;  and (4) when we have our class party at my little ranch.  The Japanese Garden was built by Isamu Taniguchi, father of a dean of the school of architecture and author of "The spirit of the garden": “one unified beauty... the embodiment of the peaceful coexistence of all the elements of nature.’

¸       Read about the Oriental garden, the Prehistoric Garden, and the sculptures in Zilker Park.

¸      Check out pictures of these places on our web site.

¸       

245                  Definition of a Garden

246-248           Tower Memorial Garden

262-270           Definitions of bucolic, pastoral, etc.

271                  Form for visit to the garden

272-273           Isamu Taniguchi

274                  Taniguchi, "The Spirit of the Garden"

275-285           Bauld, “The Mother Tree”

286                  map of Zilker park

287                  Map of Zilker Botanical Garden

288-291           Zilker Park extra credit options,

292-297           Philosopher’s Rock

298                  Hartman Prehistoric Garden

 

note that your interview will be due Feb. 5: see 35-6 Learning Record Instructions.]

 

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“Truth to Nature”

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6 Feb. 5 . DRAWING,  WRITING,  AND ARCHITECTURE: SYCAMORE VS. MODERNIST ARCHITECTURE IN AUSTIN AND BARCELONA.

WRITING DUE: BRING LR parts A1. A2. due. Initial interview etc.  see 39-40 Learning Record Instructions.

Remember that pictures add to your grade in your Learning Record assignments. You now have a picture of yourself in a learning environment: presenting your road map. See

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/%7Ebump/E320M2/pics/maps/

This picture brings up the issue of your verbal vs. your visual styles of learning and expression. Your grade on the A2 is also enhanced by quotations from our readings.  The visual vs. the verbal is also addressed in two of our readings for tomorrow.

 

.       Weather  permitting, we will be going from the classroom to the sycamore in front of the Humanities Research Center building. There we will spend about half our time drawing and half our time writing in our journals. One of our themes will be the contrast between the tree and the modern architecture of the building and the buildings by Gaudi in Barcelona

 

Compare the Sycamore in front of the  HRC to the building and to the “Modernism” of Gaudi

            Read: 69-76 from Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain; 393-419 Bump, "Manual Photography: Hopkins, Ruskin, and Victorian Drawing"; 420-423(introductions: Hopkins, Ruskin);

 

            Internet Research:

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/mila.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/puertafm.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/batllo.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/colniag.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/parkgell.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/eltemple.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/storage.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/hotel.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/school.html

 

Journal entry on 393-419 Bump, "Manual Photography: Hopkins, Ruskin, and Victorian  Drawing.

  To be uploaded, along with drawing as attachment, to Sycamore discussion board by   Feb. 8

 

            Consider: Are these buildings (HRC and Gaudi’s) “True to Nature”? Are they “True to Nature” in Ruskin’s sense of the words? Can the influence of Ruskin’s essay be detected in these buildings? Can you find his six features of Gothic in them? What sentences are illustrated by what features? What sentences are contradicted by what features?

 

to see what your predecessors have done go to

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E320M/pics/Sycamore/drawings/

 

 

7. Feb. 10 .Drawing and Architecture II

 

 MEET AT the oldest building on campus: LITTLEFIELD HOUSE . 24th and Whitis [in case of rain meet on porch].  Contrast the Littlefield   House with the pine tree in front and with the  Communications building nearby and/or with the HRC

¸      We will spend about half our time drawing and half our time writing in our journals. One of our themes will be the contrast between the Victorian architecture of the building and the tree. Another will be the contrast with the CMA complex.

¸      See web site for examples from previous classes. These classes focused more on the tree, but included the building, and can be seen at , for example,

¸      http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/%7Ebump/RHE309K4/pics/pine/

¸       

Journal entry to be uploaded to the Littlefield Discussion Board, along with scan of drawing as an attachment by   by Feb. 13.      Include at least two citations  with page nos.

 

            Read:107-108 Littlefield House;  Ruskin, ‘The Nature of Gothic”

 

             Review:  69-76 from Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain 109-135 "Manual Photography: Hopkins, Ruskin, and Victorian  Drawing" [G14-21,  introductions: Hopkins, Ruskin];

 

            Consider: Is this building “True to Nature”? Is it “True to Nature” in Ruskin’s sense of the words? Can the influence of Ruskin’s essay be detected in this building? Can you find his six features of Gothic in it? What sentences are illustrated by what features? What sentences are contradicted by what features?

 

8. Feb. 12 LIST OF GOALS DUE;

Meet at STORY OF TEXAS museum

 

            read:

130-131 Texas History Timeline; 285-287    Story of Texas museum; 288-296       Ragsdale et al, “History is My Home: A  Survey of  Texas  Architectural  Styles” ; 297-299 Texas Savenger Hunt Worksheet

 

9. Feb 17 .  Texas architecture.

 

            Read:

337-338 Booton, “Spanish Plateresque Architecture”; 233 Old Main, University of Texas

234-5 Victorian homes, Houston; 236-242 Victorian buildings, Galveston; 243-245 Selected Victorian Eclectic “Gothic”Architecture in Texas

            Review:

 Story of Texas museum; Texas Savenger Hunt Worksheet; My Home: A Survey of  Texas Architectural  Styles; Ruskin, “The Nature of Gothic” ;The Littlefield Home; Gargoyles and Grotesques

 

See web site for more pictures:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E379S2/VicArch.html

 

            Consider: Are these buildings “True to Nature”? Are they “True to Nature” in Ruskin’s sense of the words? Can the influence of Ruskin’s essay be detected in these buildings? Can you find his six features of Gothic in them? What sentences are illustrated by what features? What sentences are contradicted by what features?

 

Upload answers to these questions to the Texas Architecture Discussion Board by  Feb.   20.   

 

 

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The Wealth and Weight of the Past

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10. Feb. 19. PROJECT 1 A DUE.  

In class assignment: Tracing the Griffin: Austin to France, the Origin of Gothic Architecture

 

First identify some of the griffins on campus at

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/%7Ebump/images/chimerie/campusch.html

 

Then to trace the griffins in the Littfield house and in the Spanish Plateresque architecture tradition evident on Sutton, Garrison, and the screen inside the Battle Hall library,

go the famous Amiens internet site

http://www.learn.columbia.edu/Mcahweb/index-frame.html

and while looking at the “porches” at the front

             read

177-205 Ruskin, “The Bible of Amiens” ; Crowe on saints in niches and body-related perception

            Review  the rest of Crowe

 

 

Computer Work Assignment due in two days: Because THE SECRET OF WRITING IS REWRITING respond to projects of others by Feb 21. Responses that consist solely of generic phrases, such as "Good Job," that do not reveal detailed knowledge of the project, will not be acceptable. You must respond in sufficient detail  to reveal that you have read the project closely.  Let the author of the essay know how it affected you as a reader, where you were pleased, where you got confused, where irritated, etc. In general, evaluate the other students' essays as works of art. If each essay were, say, a statue, which little as well as big flaws should be corrected?

Respond to at least half the class. 2 points for each response IF for each person you suggest [1] how to expand the essay and [2] how to revise one of the sentences.

 

[1] You must quote a whole sentence of the student's essay that has not been quoted by a previous respondent and specify where the sentence needs improvement and then rewrite the sentence to improve it. For the subject line of your reply, paste in the sentence you are going to rewrite so that it will be easier for others to see what sentences are left for revision.

[2] In addition, you must make suggestions on how to add a page or more of new material.

 

Grading: Remember that responding properly to the correct number of projects before the deadline is not just part of your class participation grade but also, and more importantly, your portfolio grade (14% of your final grade). For your portfolio you will print out all of your responses to other students and their quality will be fairly obvious  in that format.

You must respond to at least half the class in detail. You get extra credit for every three people over the required half of the class to whom you respond. This extra credit can be used to improve your class participation grade.

Reading assignment for project responses: Bazerman 4-6, 8-9, 12-14

 

 

11. Feb. 24 Adams: Mt. St. Michel and Chartres

Medieval France II:  Emergence of the Feminine.

 

Where are symbols of the feminine on our campus?

internet research: http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E320M/Marianism.html

 

When are where did the feminine return in Western civilization?

internet research: http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E320M/Adams.html

 

            Read:

  Medievalist Impulse Cathedrale ... Chartres. 289-303 Adams,  Mont-Saint-Michel and Chartres; 307-309 Pater “La Gioconda”;   41B-C  Semiotics of The Mona Lisa; 41H-41I Reading the Visual Arts;

            Review Crowe;

           

 

12. Feb. 26 Medieval Paris: The University, Notre Dame

             Reading: 314-320 Newman, The Idea of a University. Arnold, Literature and Science. XA 37B-CBrickley, “Value of the Liberal Arts” 37D-E; Bump, “Logic of the Humanities”; ; 488-498 Hugo, Notre Dame de Paris ; 588-598 Gargoyles and Grotesques

                        Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

13 Mar  2  DUE: Instead of a journal: quiz in class on (1) definition of “medievalism”; (2) definition of “Gothic”;  and (3) Ruskin’s six features of Gothic

TOPIC: London: medieval vs. medievalist architecture.

 Westminster Abbey +Westminster Hall  vs. the Palace of Westminster.

           

 Our Images:http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Westminster/Westminster/

 

            Reading:  391 Definition of medievalism; 658-60 J. Morris on Ruskin’s Oxford; 765-778 Pevsner  Westminster Abbey +Westminster Hall  vs. the Palace of Westminster.; 457-466 Pugin;  479 Definitions of Gothic;  and 669-696 Ruskin "The Nature of Gothic."

 

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14 Mar. 4 DUE points to be awarded based on class participation: be ready when called on to apply Ruskin’s six principles to what we see on the screen.

TOPIC FOR THE DAY:Medieval Oxford. Virtual tour of city and New, Magdalen, Merton, and Christ Church Colleges.  At Magdalen check out  medieval Gothic in the Great Quadrangle and the tower.  Check out medieval Gothic features of the Lady Chapel, the Latin Chapel, the chapter house, the central tower and spire.

      Our Images:

 http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/walk.html

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/NewCollege/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Magdalen/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Merton/

 

     Reading: Oxford on the Tower, 552, and at All Saints church near campus, 501-2. Maps of Oxford: city 593; architecture 727; grotesques 858.  Dougill on the cathedral 645-646;  Tyack on the Cathedral, Merton, St. Mary’s, St. Mary Magdalen; New, All Souls, Magdalen Colledge, St. John’s, etc.: 728-747. Blackwood on the grotesques 817-858.

            Review  669-696 Ruskin "The Nature of Gothic"

 

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15 Mar. 9. DUE: PROJECT 1B  AND A JOURNAL ENTRY.   

TOPIC FOR THE DAY: Oxford in Literature  

            Reading: Dougill 594-6, 610-616,647-651; Jan Morris 652-653, 665-668; Victorian authors timeline, 697-701; JUDE* Part 1chs. 1-3, Part 2, chs. 1-2; opening of ZULEIKA*

(*You to read all of these novels: these are just the parts to be discussed in class at this time.)

            Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

.        Revised Project due. Remember your grade will be reduced for each error that is repeated from your first draft! Follow suggestions in  Polished Writing Instructions II: Revising the Essay

.        Turn in to instructor in the pocket folder with your name on the outside:

¸      [1] revised project with ALL changes, even the smallest periods and commas, HIGHLIGHTED

¸      [2] the first project with instructor's original comments and

¸      [3] a print-out of suggestions from other students with suggestions you liked best HIGHLIGHTED

.        [4] follow suggestions on second page of Polished Writing Instructions II: Revising the Essay

           

 

 

16. Mar. 11 GOALS REVISION AND SELF OBSERVATION 1

Assignment of student presentations for Mar. 23 + 25.

Oxford, the sublime + the grotesque: New, Merton, and Magdalen Colleges

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/PRB/CR/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/both/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/creatures/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/devotional/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/greenmen/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/humans/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/nature/

 

            Reading: FOR LR: 39 LR “biweekly” instructions; “The Witness,” pp. 41L-47.   875-890 Christina Rossetti, Goblin Market.

 

            Review Tyack 730, 733-737, 740-42, . Blackwood 829-842, 846-849.

Ruskin on Savage and Grotesque in "The Nature of Gothic"; 805-816 Gargoyles and Grotesques;

            Review:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/NewCollege/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Magdalen/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Merton/

 

 

 

17. Mar. 23 Oxford Medievalist Frescos and Poetry. Student Presentations.

Virtual visits to the Oxford Union to see the frescos on the library ceiling. Cf. our student union.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/union/Oxfordunion.html

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/union/

 

            Reading: 891-900 The Pre-Raphaelites; Rossetti 903-4; J. Morris  661-2; Lang 702-3; Tyack 753; Oxford Union murals:  787-803; Morris’s “Defense of Guenevere” and “King Arthur’s Tomb” 702-724.

 

 

 18 Mar. 25 Oxford and London Medievalist Painting.  Student Presentations.
Virtual visit to The Ashmolean Museum. Pre-Raphaelite and related paintings.  Room 56 on the  second floor  is devoted to Pre-Raphaelites. It includes  Hunt’s British Family Protecting a Christian Missionary from the Druids 1850: in their brochure: “his first major  ‘Pre-Raphaelite’ work and is full of  ‘High  Church’ symbolism.” London.  Virtual visit to the Pre-Raphaelite paintings at the Tate Gallery.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Ashmolean/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/PRB/

 

            Review: 891-900 The Pre-Raphaelites; Rossetti 903-4; J. Morris  661-2; Lang 702-3.
 

Mar. 28 Excursion to Driskill Hotel, Congress Ave., St. Mary’s, and the Capitol

         Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/Congress/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/Driskill/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/modernGothic/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/sm/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/classical/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/Neoclassical/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/capitol/

 

         Review Crowe on the Pantheon, Pugin on Neoclassic vs. Gothic, and Ruskin  on Gothic

 

19. Mar. 30   Oxford and Kelmscott: Medievalist Art and Architecture.

Viritual visit to Exeter college chapel  and  Kelmscott Manor. Then on to University Christian Church.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Exeter/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/ucc/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/kelmscott/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/PRB/Morris/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/PRB/BurneJones/

 

            Reading: Guide to Exeter College chapel 783-786; Tyack 754-5; Morris: 779;  Morris and Kelmscott 780-782; Univ. Christian Church symbolism, 480-86; shell symbolism 522-3;Morris at the HRC 905-909.

            Review:  Morris’s “Defense of Guenevere” and “King Arthur’s Tomb” 702-724. 891-900 The Pre-Raphaelites

            Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

20. apr 1.Oxford Medievalism IV.

Virtual visit to Christ Church Cathedral to compare medieval Gothic features of the Lady Chapel, the Latin Chapel, the chapter house, the central tower and spire to medievalist art. Then on to the HRC on our campus.

http://www.chem.ox.ac.uk/oxfordtour/christchurch/default.asp

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/ChristChurch/

 

 

            Readings: 901-916 Pre-Raphaelite art at the HRC; 917  Ransom Center Map; 918-21  Guide to southeast corner window. 922-931 Bump, Catalogue of the Hopkins Collection;  932 Hopkins,  “Spring”; 932-3   ‘In the Valley of the Elwy” ; 932 Hopkins, “The Starlight Night”; etc.; Dougill 645-6 on St. Frideswide; Tyack 755 on Pre-Raphaelite art in the cathedral;

            Review: Dougill on the cathedral 645-646; 658-60 J. Morris on Ruskin’s Oxford; 891-900 The Pre-Raphaelites; Rossetti 903-4; J. Morris  661-2; Lang 702-3.

Preparation for our visit to Hopkins’s drawings in the HRC: go to

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/Hopkins/

Here are pictures of some of the drawings (or ones similar to them) that we will see at the HRC are listed as drawings1.jpg, drawings3.jpg, and drawings4.jpg Consider:

 Journal entry (two copies) answering these questions :

1.How are these like and unlike the drawings you and others made of the sycamore and the pine?

The trees Hopkins saw include treeline.jpg and  oak2.jpg, (use oak.jpg as a closeup).

2.What if anything did you learn from the drawing/writing exercises at the HRC sycamore and the Littlefield pine?

4. What if anything did you learn from seeing Hopkins’s writing in the original manuscripts?

5. What if anything did you learn from seeing the Pre-Raphaelite materials?

 

 

21.  Apr 8. Project 2A due. Medievalism in Religion.

Meet at All Saints church, 27th and Whitis. Virtual visit to Oxford St. Mary's The Tractarians and the Oxford Movement. Compare to Austin St. Mary’s. 

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/StMary/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/sm/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/campus/AllSaints/

 

 

            Readings:  All Saints symbolism 487-521;  Dougill 614-15; J. Morris 655-7; Dougill  597-99, 625-6; Blackwood  822-3, 828; Tractarianism 859-864;  JUDE Part 2, ch. 1;Tyack, 731, 743-4.

 

 

Computer Work Assignment due in two days: Because THE SECRET OF WRITING IS REWRITING respond to projects of others by Feb 21. Responses that consist solely of generic phrases, such as "Good Job," that do not reveal detailed knowledge of the project, will not be acceptable. You must respond in sufficient detail  to reveal that you have read the project closely.  Let the author of the essay know how it affected you as a reader, where you were pleased, where you got confused, where irritated, etc. In general, evaluate the other students' essays as works of art. If each essay were, say, a statue, which little as well as big flaws should be corrected?

Respond to at least half the class. 2 points for each response IF for each person you suggest [1] how to expand the essay and [2] how to revise one of the sentences.

 

[1] You must quote a whole sentence of the student's essay that has not been quoted by a previous respondent and specify where the sentence needs improvement and then rewrite the sentence to improve it. For the subject line of your reply, paste in the sentence you are going to rewrite so that it will be easier for others to see what sentences are left for revision.

[2] In addition, you must make suggestions on how to add a page or more of new material.

 

Grading: Remember that responding properly to the correct number of projects before the deadline is not just part of your class participation grade but also, and more importantly, your portfolio grade (14% of your final grade). For your portfolio you will print out all of your responses to other students and their quality will be fairly obvious  in that format.

You must respond to at least half the class in detail. You get extra credit for every three people over the required half of the class to whom you respond. This extra credit can be used to improve your class participation grade.

Reading assignment for project responses: Bazerman 4-6, 8-9, 12-14

 

 

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Nature and the College Campus

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22. Apr 13. GOALS REVISION AND SELF OBSERVATION II.   

Christ Church College and the Arnold landscape compared to the Tower Memorial Garden. Virtual visit to Kensington Gardens, London, and the landscape west of Oxford and then on campus to biology ponds area.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/KG/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/aj/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Arnold/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E309K/biology.html

 

            Readings:   Dougill 629, 617-25, 644; J. Morris 663-4;  245 Definition of a Garden; 246-8 Tower Memorial Garden; 249-53  Arnold, introduction, and “Kensington Gardens”; 252-261 Forster, “the Other Side of the Hedge”; 262-270 Definitions of bucolic, pastoral, etc. + JUDE Part 1, chs. 1-3

            Review 314-320  Idea of a University, PT. II

            Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

23.  Apr. 15. Nature and the College Campus II: Binsey vs. Waller Creek. Meet at Waller Creek: behind the Alumni Center at the Umlauf statue of Mother and Child.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/PortMeadow/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/FS301/Waller.html

 

 

 

 

            Readings: Dougill 625-7 (includes “Binsey Poplars”) and  383-387 Four terms for sense of place: genius loci,  querencia, inscape and instress; 162-3 Waller Creek, introduction; 164-167 Ellison and Jones, “Waller Creek Walk”; 168 Jones, introduction; 169-176 Jones, from Life on Waller Creek 177-183  Jones, "Anatomy of a Riot"; 184-194 "Committed 'til Death"; 195-197 Oliphant, “San Jacinto”

     Review Dougill 597-99; JUDE Parts 1 & 2

      Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

April 17. Party at Pied Beauty Ranch

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/

 

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The “Wonderland” of Higher Education

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24. APR 20 Student Presentations. Alice on the Water?

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Thames.html

 

            Readings: ALICE BOOKS + Dougill 602-608, 642-3, and Accounts of Eights Week in ZULEIKA

 

25.  APR 22 Project 2B due. MEET AT THE TEXAS MEMORIAL MUSEUM, TRINITY STREET ENTRANCE. Alice and University Science Museums.

http://www.tmm.utexas.edu/index.html

http://www.chem.ox.ac.uk/oxfordtour/universitymuseum/#

 

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/UnivMuseum/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/RHE309K2/pics/tmm/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/geo/Hoggpatio.jpg

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/images/arch/geo/Hoggpoem.jpg

 

             Readings:  ALICE BOOKS + + Dougill 602-608, 642-3;  725-6 “Huxley-Wilberforce debate at the Oxford University Museum; 126-129 Evolutionary and Geological Timelines; 135-139 Texas Memorial Museum; 140A-F Genesis; 140G-141 Tennyson, introduction; 142-143 Tennyson, In Memoriam; 144-147 Graves, "Carved in Stone";148 Eiseley, from The Firmament of Time ; 149-153 Darwin, introduction; 154 Evolution, introduction; 155-160 Darwin,  from The Origin of Species; 161“The Tree of Life”; Blackwood, 856-857;

             Review 117-125 Ellison and Jones, “Walking the Forty Acres”;   Ruskin "The Nature of Gothic"  

 

 

.        Revised Project due. Remember your grade will be reduced for each error that is repeated from your first draft! Follow suggestions in Polished Writing Instructions II: Revising the Essay

.        Turn in to instructor in the pocket folder with your name on the outside:

¸      [1] revised project with ALL changes, even the smallest periods and commas, HIGHLIGHTED

¸      [2] the first project with instructor's original comments and

¸      [3] a print-out of suggestions from other students with suggestions you liked best HIGHLIGHTED

.        [4] follow suggestions in Polished Writing Instructions II: Revising the Essay

 

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Jude,  Zuleika, and an American at Oxford

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26. Apr 27. College Life and Rituals. Sheldonian theatre vs. SuperDrum, South Mall.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/Sheldonian/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/gargoyles/humans/

 

            Reading: Blackwood 850-854;  JUDE  Parts 3 + 4, and sections on the Emperors in ZULEIKA.

            Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

27. Apr 29. Outsiders. Jude’s origins: Fawley, White Horse Monument, Hardy country. Beerbohm on the American.

Our Images:

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/HardyCountry/Fawley/

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/oxford/WhiteHorseHill/

 

            Reading:  865-874 Guide to Fawley. Sections of Zuleika on the Rhodes Scholar. JUDE Parts 5 + 6;

            Review JUDE Part 1chs. 1-3

      Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

28.  May 4. Zuleika

            Reading: rest of Zuleika

            Write a Journal entry (two copies)

 

29. May 6. France and Spain at the end of the century: Impressionism, Art Nouveau and Modernisme

Read: 452-455 Pater, “Conclusion” to The Renaissance (or “some reasons to be an English major”)

 

Journal Entry [2 copies]: write your responses to two Impressionist paintings of nature of your choice. You can use any sources you wish, though you must provide documentation for whatever source[s] you use.

            If you want to use the web you can start with the sites below. The first is about the whole Impressionist school; the second shows how to move from that site to a specific painter, in this case Monet; the third and fourth are alternative Van Gogh sites; the last two are sites from students in this class in the past focusing on their favorite paintings.

 

www.ibiblio.org/wm/paint/glo/impressionism

www.ibiblio.org/wm/paint/auth/monet

www.vangoghgallery.com

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E379S/fall97/windy/cmonet/monet.html

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E379S/fall97/lisa/gogh.html

 

 To get some idea of the possible relation between painting and

poetry I have designed two pages: on Hopkins and Monet, on Hopkins and

Van Gogh.

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E309K/Hopkins1.html

http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~bump/E309K/Hopkins2.html

 

For Modernisme review

 

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/mila.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/puertafm.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/batllo.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/colniag.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/parkgell.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/eltemple.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/storage.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/hotel.html

http://www.op.net/~jmeltzer/Gaudi/school.html

 

 

30  Compensation day for St Marys and Capitol excursion

 

31. LR FINAL DUE May 11 in mail slot of Par 132 by 3:30

 

32. PORTFOLIO DUE May 14   10 to 12n  

 

33. PORTFOLIO TO BE PICKED UP May 18 10-12 or earlier


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