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There is an old Chinese way of thinking that analyzes and labels people in the same manner as our modern-day personality tests. According to middle-aged Chinese mothers around the world, every person is either lacking or has an abundance of a certain element. For example, a man who has a deficiency of the “fire” element would have a very calm temperament. In my case, it is unquestionable that I have a profusion of the “water” element, meaning that my interests are too varied and ephemeral to

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P2A

"Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station

will be held by anybody else, these pages must show."

first sentence, David Copperfield, by Charles Dickens

“I mean, I’ll admit that I don’t have everything figured out, but I know that societal ills cause my arms to ache for action, and if school has taught me anything, it’s that education is the panacea. So, if I love English and education, as well as helping others, I will welcome any sort of conflict on

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P2B

"Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station

will be held by anybody else, these pages must show."

first sentence, David Copperfield, by Charles Dickens

“I mean, I’ll admit that I don’t have everything figured out, but I know that societal ills cause my arms to ache for action, and if school has taught me anything, it’s that education is the panacea. So, if I love English and education, as well as helping others, I will welcome any sort of conflict on

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Self Evaluations of P2A and P2B

Self Evaluation of P2A

“It is fine not to know how to reach your life’s goals” is what I saw as the thesis. The focus was kind of hazy, since the thesis is presented at the very end, after a dizzying account of the author’s history. Be more concise and to the point in stating the thesis, and maybe try to include it in other places in your paper.

The organization is fair. I would say that there is a lot of confusing verb tenses, but for the most part, the reader is able to follow the

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Reviews of P2A

For “Christie”:

very good (6)

The author wishes to improve on her faults by strengthening her positive abilities, particular that of sympathy and understanding. Your paper was concise and well structured, but some of the pictures and text boxes used to describe them blotted out sections of your paper and made parts of it hard to follow.

very good (6)

The paper is very well organized and has a logical order of sequence. I''m kind of jealous of how well thought out everything is, when it comes