Responses to my Project 2

Samantha J. Allison:

Haha, I found one Easter egg, and was thoroughly frightened.  I don't want to ruin it for everyone else though. ;-)

Rebekah Bond Hotze:

Brooks,

Your project is awesome!  Absolutely hilarious.  I love the part about him not knowing who Lewis Carroll is.  Good Job!

Keturah Mary Jacobs:

Well, I didn't find any easter eggs, but I'll keep looking. Very entertaining, great accent Brooks! I really liked the who and where parts. Perhaps you could expand what and when with more links or more options. I really liked how his mouth moved when he was talking.

Brittany Jayne Lacy:

Brooks, I am so impressed.  However, where in the heck are the easter eggs? It is killing me! Amazing job!

Claire Anna Davis:

Brooks-

What an awesome project! It was fun to look through. I liked the Brittish accent touch. My only suggestion would be to maybe go back and add some more commentary, like with the Alice pictures. I think it would be cool to have some comments on Alice and the pictures themselves and to hear what Carroll would have said about Alice and his career in photography and how he felt about it and the subjects he was photographing. Other than that, it looks great!!

Holly Lynn Groening:

This is freaking halarious. I laughed so hard!!! I don't know what you can change, because it is all very funny. Maybe expand? There doesn't seem to be a lot. You could talk more about Charles' writing?

Courtney Suzanne Knox:

brooks! your bot thingy was so cool! you're amazing at this crap!
ok, so i really dont know how to suggest things to you since i think your project is like perfect, so pretty much the only thing i can think of is that i dont think it's 2100 words. you might want to go back and add some more words (unless you and bump have some arrangement that you dont have to do it or something). and, since you know how to do this, maybe you could add even more awesome pictures- dodgson has a ton of photography online, you could put together like a portfolio for him. ok, it was awesome though seriously.

Suhwa “Audrey” Wang:

Hahaha, awesome!

How succinct could "who was Alice Liddell" be?  I suppose, maybe in some ways, it is fitting because her role in his life is significant but somewhat unclear.  If it doesn't cramp the style, I'd add commentary on the Alice pictures-- who her sisters were, other childhood friends of Dodgson's.  Or add more info on Dodgson-- his profession, his other writings, more places of Christ Church.

I love this.