Reviewer 2
The comments herein showed that the reader obviously took great care in reading my paper, and made many great points. From this comment alone I changed three things.

On the other hand, she quotes my paper where I say "impersonal quality--the movement of the wave..." and tells me not to use a dash there. Good job, captain detail, but maybe you should consider telling Hardy not to use a dash there, since it''''s within a quote from him. Reviewer 3
Well, at least he found my thesis?

Reviewer 4
This reader obviously read my paper too. Although I opted not to incorporate any of these comments, it was nice to like at my paper from a different angle.

Organization
Reviewer 1
It doesn''''t appear that this reader paid much attention to the actual organization of the paper, but just had a check-list of what should be there. I wish it had more to do with the semantic content of my paper.

Reviewer 2
Very encouraging words from a reader that I feel had definitely taken the time to familiarize themself with my paper.

Reviewer 3
I''''m pretty sure this can be said about any paper that reads decently. Not all too helpful

Reviewer 4
First of all, this is the only organization tip I used in the whole paper, so it was definitely very helpful.

However, the reader requests that I "quote the exact passage that the dead rose image relates to," when in actuality, I DID. It really pissed me off to read this, so I''''m discrediting this person entirely.

Flow
Reviewer 1
The reinforcement of my reasoning was helpful in that is validated me. At this point the reader obviously liked my paper, but kind words are definitely important to the writing process.

Reviewer 2
It was nice to get called out on my use of passive voice, although in some of these instances I preferred it over making an overly awkward active-voice sentence. Still, I took a lot of this to heart, and intend to incorporate it into my future papers.

Reviewer 3
This brought a lot of awkward sentences to my attention. I definitely went back and corrected these first, taking out winding sentences and replacing them with shorter, more concise sentences that are more effective.

Reviewer 4
I enjoyed hearing that I wasn''''t being bombastic, although Bump obviously disagreed. By saying that the connections to Chronus and the Grim Reaper were worthwhile, it encouraged me to think of new and inventive ways to integrate multimedia into future projects.