Self Evaluation
My focus was on target. I concentrated on the idea of rationality and how that concept will allow me to become a humble leader. I discussed how people have the ability to make their own choices, and often times, people can either decide to help themselves or help society. My choice is to help society, and my paper focused on that concept of where I would take my decision. My passion for compassion is strong. Although I did not explain what it is I plan to do, I discuss why I have this conviction and how I plan to use my education to further my cause.
I think I gave myself a 6.
Overall, organization was good. I made a brief
outline before I started:
Compassion
Gates is my hero
When he dies, he leaves a legacy of social change
Life Goals (how I want to impact the world, my dream)
Purpose here at UT (in relation to my goals)
Role of passion on future, on world
View of the future
After I leave earth
I think this outline is pretty solid and addressed what I needed to address in the paper. Without a doubt, I am certain that some ideas do need to be moved to another place for clarity, but over all, the essay is well organized.
I think I gave myself a 6 or 7.
Flow was good. I might need to work on my transitions and make my ideas more succinct. I tried to stay to the point and avoid useless jargon or ramble. Hopefully I did that. In general, I don’t think I had too much of a problem with flow, as the outline allowed me to change from idea to idea pretty easily.
I think I gave myself a 5 or 6.