P4A
Focus
1. Reviewer 1 – 5
Good advice, though not very specific. The suggestion to move around the introduction was helpful though.
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 4
Supportive, but I would have appreciated some advice about the focus of the paper as a whole instead of specific sentences to fix.
5. Reviewer 5 – 6
More advice, less summary! Though it was helpful to see what how my readers understood my paper.
Organization
1. Reviewer 1 – 5
Advice was very general and it would have been more helpful to have more specific suggestions.
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 4
I would have appreciated some advice on organization!
5. Reviewer 5 – 5
The suggestion to improve the conclusion was definitely helpful, but the rest was basically summary that didn’t help me very much.
Flow
1. Reviewer 1 – 4
Though I appreciate that the reviewer points out things they think I did to help the flow, I would have liked more concrete suggestions about how to improve it!
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 6
The specific examples were really helpful in this case.
5. Reviewer 5 – 6
Making the suggestions more specific definitely made them much more helpful
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P4B
Focus
1. Reviewer 1 – 6
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
The specific examples and explanations of where you saw the problems were both really helpful.
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 6
It was helpful that you pointed out a specific place where you saw a problem.
5. Reviewer 5 – 6
I can see how it is confusing to jump back and forth between the description of myself and the movie.
Organization
1. Reviewer 1 – 6
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
I think you're probably right about the thesis!
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 6
It was helpful to see where other people saw weaknesses in my paper, and these suggestions are worthwhile.
5. Reviewer 5 – 6
A few people have pointed out that the "helpful person" part of my essay seems a little out of place. Thanks for the heads up.
Flow
1. Reviewer 1 – 6
2. Reviewer 2 – 7
3. Reviewer 3 – 7
4. Reviewer 4 – 6
Specific examples are the great, and suggestions on how to improve problems are even better!
5. Reviewer 5 – 6
Good suggestion about the first and second paragraphs.
