WOW....you really are a good nature writer. I think you did an excellent job of descibing the pond around you. I really agree with you in the fact that many students on this campus do not have time or take the time to relax and enjoy the nature that surrounds them. Unfortunately, i too am one of those students, and it is very sad and depressing to me. I also like your end...it leaves the reader questioning and pondering if they are too contributing to the pollution of the pond. Maybe if more people read this...we can start a BIO POND PROTECTION GROUP!