Excellent description. I am mad for you too. I am not sure wht you could do to improve your story. Maybe talk about what you expected it to be like at the top, or what you felt like on the way down or the next time you saw it? Would you ever try to climb it again? And that time would you take other people with you? But really a great story. And a very unexpected ending, I can not believe you never made it to the top. Great paper. A definite A.