For:Kristina Mann I enjoyed reading your web site. I too have a family ranch that we all go to and I have grown up in. So I can share some of your thoughts on your story. I think that you do a great job of talking about your family and the events but you do not give your interpretation of the nature of the land and the descriptions that are involved in the ranch. You stress the events and you talk about the golden egg for quite a while. My suggestion is that you definately incorporate the special events but you talk about the ranch itself as well.