That was a great story. I really liked all the little anecdotes that you had in it. They made it really interesting, and at times really humorous. You might want to wrap your text around your images using the align="left", or the align="right" tags in the img src tag. That would cause the text to wrap around the sides of the images. Then you could read about the story, and see the picture at the same time. But that's just a technical thing... As far as the writing goes, as I said before, I really liked your story. I would like to know a little bit more about the history of the ranch. I don't think you need to do that, but I would still like to know more about it. Great Job Kristina.