Kristina- I could tell that you felt strongly about the ranch being the only constant natural surrounding in your life. I think that you should write a little more on how moving around so much influenced yopu perseption of nature. I think that you should also add more to the story of the Christmas tree thingbecause it is akward with so much about the easter egg hunt. THe conclusion is a little choppy. I thought that the pictures really enhanced the story visually. I, lastly, think that the bright yellow was to bright and you could enlarge the picture and icon to fill space.