I really liked the blue and yellow you used, it's very eye catching! I think that you could possibly use more design to make it more attractive. Your essay is fine, but for some reason, the color you chose for the background is a bit disturbing. It is almost discouraging and not at all inticing. You might also want to have at least one more link or possibly break down your essay and add pictures along side of your writing. Pictures are very helpful and intresting. I really liked the pictures you put on your links.