Celeste, I really enjoyed your essay. Isn't it amazing what an imagination we had as kids. You question reality a lot when you are a kid because you don't know what is real and what is not, if it is a dream or if its true. When I was reading your essay I kept trying to picture where exactly you grew up? I think you should include that in your essay. Also, I enjoyed your ghost stories, you may want to talk about how everyone responded to these ghostly creatures. What did your parents think? and your brother? Good job!