For: David Brown I really enjoyed the way in which you used a poem to describe your adventure. Although I do not believe in hunting I thought that you used very good description to describe the land and what you saw. I think that maybe you could go into better description about the 10-point you shot. Also the stanza that starts with, "Nature's relaxing, peaceful, and relieves stress," I think that another word in the last line of the stanza might go beeter with stress than the same word. Does that make any sense? I don't know just look it over and see what you think. I enjoyed you poem and it takes a lot of work to rhyme for that long and have it all make sense. You did a nice job.