Hey, I am so sorry. I totally just realized that we were at FCA camp together. I would of said something sooner, but it just dawned on me. When you came in I was like, where do I know her from. But thats it FCA camp. WOW, small world. Anyways, your paper. Very cute the whole pretend camping thing. I thought my family was the only one that did that. I'm not sure what you could add to improve your paper, it is already great. Maybe more about how nature changes as you get older or something. But it is already great. A+.