Pretty good. I think you have done a good job on this project. You talk about your own experiences with nature in your past. Your journal is very descriptive. It would be better if you coporate the picture and your essay at the same time or put more pictures so that we would know more about what you did during your adventure. Also, it might be better if you put some description about your picture that you take when you were having this trip. In general, i think you have done a pretty good job and i really feel that you have a very wonderful and unforgettable experience.