Excellent! I really like your story especially your conclusion, "I cannot control fate, but I can enjoy what I have now. As long as I live on this beautiful earth, I will cherish what nature brings me." You have successfully incorporate your journal with your picutures, which makes the reader even easier to understood what was your childhood like. Also, you talk about your traditional in your ranch and the history of your favorite place, which i believe it is very interesting. It will be a little bit better if you can put more pictures so that we can know more about you. I think your's is very good and i really can't think of anything that you need to improve. Your journal is very easy to understand and it keeps the reader's attention thoughtout from the beginning to the end. Excellent!