Celeste, This is a really good paper. I really like how you related the two nature experiences. Try not to use contractions though, and maybe you can focus a little more on the transition of discussing one experience, when you were young, to the other experience, when you were older. I can really tell how different you felt in these two nature experiences.I love sleeping beneath the stars, and I too have heard the sounds of nature in a special way make a song. I also agree that nature is one of the best places to really listen to God.This is a great paper,maybe just a few changes.:)