Nature's Hymn,I like the way that rings. Infact I was kind of in a goofy mood when I first started reading your essay and I started off singing the beginning of your essay.. I know I am goofy. Anyhow I really did enjoy your essay. It seems to me that you share a strong relationship with God. I think it is awesome that you speak out about it in a very unique way through your writing. And yes so many times I still wish I was a child pretending I was the princess or something. I would say to add a bit more between your story as a child and as an adult, so that the story might flow a bit more. julie