David, Your poem is creative and original. I like how it starts off slow and then gradually works up to the hunt. You did a good job of describing your feelings during the actual hunt of the 10 point buck. I started to feel my adrenaline. I do have a suggestion though. You should try to incorporate more of the scenery during the waiting period between the hunt. Try descriinge how it makes you feel, but if you could describe a bit more the land around you, the scene that actually takes your breath away, I would relate a lot more to your story. Maybe you should try a website and add pictures. That would really improve the poem too. Good Job.