I really enjoyed your paper. I'm so glad you have such a special relationship with your sister. That stingray experience would have left me disturbed for a while and really shaken up, so I reallly respect your sister, she is really brave. I guess the only thing that you could possibly work on is more detail on your first few adventures, you said that they were amazing but describe how amazing. What did you see, what did you feel. That's all i can comment about because you paper was very intresting and i really enjoyed it. Great work!