Great job Kristina! Your story was very personal and it was nice to read about something that is very meaningful to you. A few suggestions might be to add some pictures of the easter egg hunt since it was a major part of your journaling. Maybe if you had a picture of the Christmas tree inside your apartment, you could compare it to the picture of it on the ranch. Then, if you were feeling really deep you could talk about what it was like for that tree to be existing on the ranch vs. existing in your apartment away from it's natural habitat. Great job!