This is very interesting to read about. I think that you should re-read what you have written and make sure that your verbs and nouns agree a little better. Some of your sentences do no make much sense. Also, I think that you should break up your huge paragraph into lots of smaller ones. It helps the reader to read your work much better if you have breaks in your writting. Finally, I like the way that you incorporated science into nature, but I am still a little confused on just how biology and physics relate to nature. Try to explain this more. Other than those few things, good job.Return to Discussion Forum Index