Your paper is good. I like how you are combining science and nature. Making them work together instead of aganist each other. The only thing is in the begingin you said that science was divided into three catagories, but you only give three example or catagories. It kind of threw me off and confused me. It was in the very first paragraph you give examples of biology and physics but no third one. Other than that your paper is excellent I really liked reading it.