Re: Project 2 - New York
Claudia Cope, Apr 18, 2000 01:58 PM
I thought that your web page was great. The pictures that you used were awesome and helped convey your story better and your expierences. I think that you could elaborate more on the way you feel and your ideas. For example the part when you say that everything that you wanted from nature was in your backyard, yet you don't explain why. So I would suggest thatyou elaborate. Your stories were great.

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