Noe, I see that even though you lived in a small town, you could still find things to entertain you. I grew up in a big city and was bored most of the time. I really didn't have much of a chance to go waling in the woods. I could never escape civilization where I lived. Your story is enjoyable to read and though it focuses on one specific topic (which is good don't get me wrong), you are still able to keep your reader enthralled and interested in what you have to say. You may want to add some of your emotions that coincide with you spending time with your brothers and of the slower moments in time.