Brooke, The pictures on your New York Web Page were fun to look at. They brought back good memories I have of New York. I noticed that you had a quote about the dissapearance of God, next to one of your pictures of the city. Maybe you could describe how being in New York made you think of this. Did you feel like there was no God in New York City, or does the word "God" in this quote mean something else to you (like nature)? Another thing, while you are talking about the nature in Austin, and comparing it to that in New York, you could add pictures of Austin nature, so the audience can visually contrast the two scenes. You did a nice job.