Noe, Your story is great man. Where is Big Wells, Texas for those of us that do not know? I think you did a great job in that it was kinda of like nature vs. man in your story. Humanity is the railroad track which wants to be isolated from the natural world, but the weeds that pop up and the vines and the rabits that braved the railroad all attempt to hold on to their slipping grip on man. Don't know if this is what you intended or not but this is how I interpretted it. Maybe just try to add some more on what you saw and how you felt when Humanities machine tried to smash ya.