Re: Project 2 - New York
Jennifer Mann, Apr 18, 2000 02:22 PM
I like the way you have set up your website. It is nice to be able to look through it all and realize that you can discuss more than one nature palce you have visited. About your Nature in New York essay, I liked it. I honestly thought it was really short. I think that you should definately think about adding some more to it. I know that you said there wasn't a lot of nature in New York, but try to talk about how you felt because it was lacking. You could also talk so more about what you saw in central park. I think if you put some more detail into it, it would be much stronger. I did, on the other hand, enjoy your pictures!

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