I think it is awesome that this class really has changed the way that you look at nature! THat is what college is all about; changing the way you think and the way you look at the world. I can tell that you have changed the way you look at cities because you added in all the major themes that we have been talking about in class into your story which is great! THe story was overall well written and I could teel you spent alot of time thinking about what you wanted to say. I did think that the story was a lttle short and that you could add a little more description in on the nature scene that you experienced. good-job!