Wow! Can you beleive that people claim that TV teaches us nothing? It it has not been for Baywatch, you might have neen a resident barnacle to the great Gulf. I really enjoyed your story. It was entertaining, and still in touch with nature...and stuff. Anyhoo, as far as suggestions, you might want to go into a little more detail about your feelings. I know it sounds pretty cliche/cheesey, but it's the best advice that I can think of. In my opinion you did an excellent job, but I have to suggest something. Oh well.