I think it is interesting how you chose to write about New York, a place that not many people associate with nature. I would like to see more pictures and read more about how the lack of trees, as you talked about, effected you. Which landscape did you like better, or feel more at home with? Could you live there? Why do you think so many people live there if there is not much of a connection with nature? Maybe you could address some of these issues in your revision to your website.